Thread:Blueboy6032/@comment-24899099-20141103162646

I've noticed that you recently have added videos of how to Craft certain items and Buildings onto the wiki, This is great! As videos are useful for those who have an easier time understanding a video rather than a plain wall of black symbols. ^^

However after watching through all your videos (3 of them so far, Catapult, Bread and the Mill,Granary,Hut Video) i noticed that every single one of them contains errors, These range all from purely statistical errors to grammatical errors and Missing information. That's not very good since it gives out the wrong information to everyone who watches it, I'm going to write all errors i can find here so that you can see for yourself;

(Mill,Hut,Granary Video) First: When you're supposed to say what the hut does the text actually says "Mill shows is", Both a Grammatical and a Logical error. You also say That huts are a great way to raise your Architecture, but they are actually the worst way possible both resource wise and experience gain wise, Mill and Granary give the exact same amount of experience.(Atleast if my calculations are correct).

(Bread Video) You don't mention that Knives can cut the bread into 5 slices of bread. You say that bread can be burned, It can't, bread in this game is literally unburnable and would survive the Armageddon Unharmed. A personal Complaint here would be that it takes 40 seconds Before you actually start doing something, This might not seem like alot of time but if i want to see how to make many items then an extra 40 seconds per video adds up.

(Catapult Video) This video which was your latest was by far your best, you even mentioned that The catapult Raises your Engineering from 1 to 2. However you said a statistical error here, You said the Catapult is slower than robloxian walkspeed, Which is true, But then you threw up 18 on the screen, Not saying wether that was the catapults speed or default Robloxian walkspeed, In this case it is neither though, Default Robloxian Walkspeed is 16 and the catapult Lowers it to 12. Other than that the video is good, Altough you don't mention "Flinging people" in it's uses but mention 3 other things, None of the other things are shown in the video however while you fling both your friend and yourself. Just a minor thing though :)

In general i'd like to say that you should probably stop typing in chat, The quality of the videos are fairly bad and Reading the text you type and is said in the chat is hard, You did edit in large text on the screen which is really really nice and works perfectly fine but you still spend time typing, For no reason, Most of the time we can't even see what you type anyway and it doesn't matter since you have already edited in text saying it on the screen, It really only wastes time :/

As a last and Final note i'd like to mention that you are not allowed to advertise third party sites here on the wiki, This is written in the rules of the wiki and is in fact quite rude. (I noticed that Nobanana Removed your latest violation of this rule just a minute or two after i started Writing this post)

In any case, Good luck with your Future Endevaors. 