User blog comment:Annacaza/The Girl of War/@comment-24108228-20131127195133

I have read this 3 times now... I have read far to much dreadful fan-fiction, and this one was just incredible compaired to the rest. As stated below, perhaps a prequel? Perhaps going deeper into the magma tribe, as nobody would be so cold hearted to enslave that many people, they must have had a reason. Or perhaps they were just cruel, and you could write it from the perspective of a guard or trusted member, with mixed feelings about the tribe, eventually doing something important, which would affect this story (selflessly burning 2 merchant frigates full of solders, which would affect the final battle at the end, though getting him nearly killed by his fellow tribes men).

Or maybie a sequel, that goes into the mystery of the islands, set far in the future of the islands timeline, where everyone is on the same team, and the islands seem to have acquired a life of their own, attempting to kill the inhabitants with 'accidents', and the storyline going into the mystery of how the people got there.

Do what you think best, but if this is far from your best work, we would like to know what your best work is.