User blog comment:Kincaid1/The Sky Fortress (Story 5)/@comment-24384666-20140409195132/@comment-24384666-20140411171402

Oh well, you should revise it. But as I said in here, the story itself is very well-written. Here is an advice, try to revise it using a program like Microsoft Word, or Wordpad, or any other program that has spelling & grammar check in it. I'm sure that you will probably has some of these programs already installed on your computer, if not, then just install them. It's not that hard, is it?