User blog comment:Annacaza/The Challenge Commences/@comment-24108228-20140107170236

3 chapters with nothing but the main character being locked up and treated badly.

The description is unsettling nice, but this is rather morbid. Could you move the story along slightly faster, not all of us want to read extensive descriptions of pain and uncomfort. We can live with it happening, but there comes to a point where it becomes... unpleasant.