Thread:Qoazi/@comment-24108228-20141116002317/@comment-24108228-20141116014322

Qoazi wrote: About the Paragraphs,

I suppose that the way i Write is as if I'm telling a story all the time.

And the false information Is Added information, Not tweaked. (but this really depends on what you Think a "tweak" is") Either way, you can remove it if you like, I'm not going to stop you removing stuff that's not correct. It's a wiki after all, we're here to help fix other people's mistakes.

And yes if everyone write like this the Wiki would Look less professional, But it wouldn't necessarely Contain Masses of personal stories and opinions. '''The page did seem to contain a vast amount of stuff you had done, the details of said stuff, and your opinion on it. If everyone wrote like that, we probably would have a plethora of biased opinions. To quote the old page:''' '''"personally i've made many deathmachines, Some Animal catchers and even what i like to call the Void Door, A door mounted on an airship that teleported whoever touched it, Whoever i rammed into into the void where shortly after their character was deleted and they were instantly killed, Even Hackers that have godmode dies from that. The machine has however been banned from making, It was deemed too dangerous, And rude. (Especially since the airship was Unforageable, Gave Protection from Rain, 100% protection from Melee and ranged weapons and could be rebuilt to contain a well and even Farms if you want to)"

And a Conversation that has been Chopped in half? Is that really what you Think it sounds like? "How does one make these glitches of physics you ask? Well, That's what i'm here to show you. And without further ado let's get started." "Hello Everyone and welcome to the Airship Guide " '''I don't mean any offence when I say this, but this is how you would talk to a group of small children. I really don't need to be introduced to what I'm about to read, that's what we have titles for.''' Either way, what matters to me now is that you understand why I'm rewriting the guide. If your not going to help me make the page conform to standards, I at least want to make sure that you're aware of why I'm doing it. We have a set of guidelines, and considering you broke every single one, it's not surprising the pages needs an overhaul.