Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-12648415-20130719043133

(Didn't know what board to put this in so I stuck it in General Discussion)

Hey author, I have some constructive criticism.

I have honestly not read much of your story yet, as I do not have time. I am not that interested in reading it, but it is interesting nonetheless.

The story begins very well-written but sort of expected. The characters that were later added to the story made it more interesting to read and the way it sort of steers away from the expected events in Survival 303 makes it more anticipating (The red beast, mother and fathers, etc) However in some parts it seems like it was written impatiently. Even if a scene is intense, writing it in a rush sort of ruins the atmosphere.

Also if you are going to use images I think it is best that you credit where credit is due unless you drew them yourself, and/or ask the original artists for permission to use them.

I think that's about all I have to say for now. I am writing this quickly as I'm very busy atm so please  excuse the fact this discussion does not contain much content. 