User blog comment:Dangoslayer/Purple Shards/@comment-24108228-20150207230150

If you remove the profanity quickly enough nobody will notice. Hopefully.

If I was to give advice, it would be to slow the pace of the story. I know what's happened (I bugged scar until he came with me to go on an adventure, and then Anna just nullified the point of the aforementioned adventure by escaping without any help) and I have a basic idea of what the story is about (magiks and self-inserts), although I have no idea about anything else. Heck, I don't even know what's on any of the other islands, what the kingdom looks like, or anything but what happens in the storyline.