Board Thread:Off-Topic/@comment-24108228-20140819212322/@comment-14788207-20140821083122

I'm going to write in first person now because it is easier.

It took a while but me and my friend made it to paradise. I went to get off my raft when suddenly it flipped over. I panicked and my friend helped me up. I couldn't swim. I walked to the outside of the entrance which leads into the base of paradise tribe. As I approached the gate, a member of the tribe appeared from it. "What is your buisness here?" They asked. "We need shelter badly. A few days a go our houses were blown up and we have been living on a farm my friend found. Please let us stay, we can make boats for you." I replied. "You have to make your own houses then." They said. "Thank you!" I cried. "Have you got any iron or nails?" I asked. Suddenly a box of nails dropped on my head. Someone from the top of paradise started laughing. "NOT COOL!" I shouted up.

I went to some trees and got a bit of stone from my pocket and started to carve a handle into shape. I ripped off the handle from the tree and ripped a piece of string from my trousers. I tied the stone to my handle with it and then got more string to make it tighter. I then whacked a tree with my axe-like object and  chopped it down. I made another one for my friend and we started chopping trees down. When he had enough logs, we carried them into the base one by one then we grabbed the box of nails from the ground and nailed all the wood together and made a house from the logs. We got given some food and got a big request, To make a pirate-like ship which the tribe can sell to mainland or magma.