Thread:Qoazi/@comment-24108228-20141116002317/@comment-24899099-20141116011507

NoBanana wrote: Qoazi wrote: Well, I probably couldn't "Fix" it, Mostly because i Think it was better Before, and Think your edits make it Dull, But that's a Personal opinion. I've also read through your edits and there is false Information in there now. It may make it "Dull", but if everyone wrote like that the wiki would be a lot less professional, and basically contain a mass of personal stories and opinions. There's still plenty of room for comments and humorous remarks in it, I dislike pages that contain nothing but information as much as the next guy, but guides shouldn't look like a conversation that's been chopped in half.

As for the false information, I'm sorry about that. I do try to stick to what's been written, especially when I'm not an expert on the subject, but when converting from 1st to 2nd person some things need to be re-worded, and oftentimes the information tweaked slightly to fit the context.

Edit: Also, why the constant new paragraphs? I was particularly curious why you added them while I was editing the page. About the Paragraphs,

I suppose that the way i Write is as if I'm telling a story all the time.

And the false information Is Added information, Not tweaked. (but this really depends on what you Think a "tweak" is")

And yes if everyone write like this the Wiki would Look less professional, But it wouldn't necessarely Contain Masses of personal stories and opinions.

And a Conversation that has been Chopped in half? Is that really what you Think it sounds like?