Board Thread:Random Stuff/@comment-24506668-20131103002252

suggestions appreciated on a few paragraphs i hate

"She stopped turning and stared at someone who looked like the stereotypical private school girl who secretly works for some spy company yet has to combat her romantic desires to do her job. Red Cherry had long, perhaps brunette hair tied into a ponytail, along with what looked like cherry flavored lip gloss perfectly spread around her mouth jewelry complimenting the blazer and miniskirt she was wearing."

Help, please. ;A; 