User blog comment:Robinben1037/Fortresses and Inventions/@comment-25370207-20140919102349

Looks nice. I remember I was on that server but I had to go. Haha.

Anyways, some suggestions.

1. Use ::ToggleGuis when taking pics. It would make the screencaps much better.

2. More... buildings? I don't know, to me it looks empty... or it's probably because I'm so used to cramping things up into small spaces and completely using up the entire walled space...

3. Cropping the image so that your character isn't in the center or editing it so you're not there would definitely help put the reader's focus on the subject.

Other than that, awesome build. Keep doing more. ;D