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I apologize if this is seen as a silly thread, but I am curious as to how a Chapter of invading space marines would play out. So, I have made a simple fanfiction of it, and will hopefully expand upon it in the future. Uhm, this is my first fanfiction on this site, so it will not be very good. However, I have done fanfictions similar to this one before, just on other sites, until I was temporarily banned for making one due to the low quality which has since improved.

Episode 1

The Space Marines are travelling on a battle barge, when suddenly their void shields fail, but instead of being slaughtered by Chaos demons, they all tumble out into the Warp, where they are somehow transported some couple thousand feet above the continent/s of Survival 303. The Chapter's weapons have come with the Marines, although their vehicles have fallen out and crashed into populated areas around the Continent.

The Marines decide to set up a tower, so they can see the entire country, so they pile houses in a tower and attempt to climb up the houses, although the Marines are too heavy and the tower falls down along with the Marines. Next, they attempt to recover some of their vehicles, although they soon realize that their technology is being held by some primitive men, so they quickly retreat.

However, after retreating, they realize they could have probably easily forcibly taken their own technology back, so they attempt to invade the house with their technology inside, however there are 20 tribesmen blocking the way, so a single Marine throws a coin at them to distract the men, while the other Marines try to get inside.

The door is locked, so the Marines spit acid at the door, but it doesn't work. The Marines instead literally eat a hole in the roof and climb through, but the interior of the hut is dark, so one of them runs back to grab a flashlight. However, while running, the Marine trips over a fallen tree log, and falls over with enough force to crack the surrounding earth,

The natives hear this sound from many miles away, so they send a hunting team of 30 men to investigate, so the Marines hide in bushes so that the men pass them by, although one man notices that there are giant blue robot men inside the bushes, so he pokes it with a stick.

The Marine yells and leaps out of the bush and climbs up a tree, but his sheer weight knocks the tree down, so the Marine leaps from one tree to the other, running very quickly. The tribesmen, however, know the land much better, and use their air gliders to fly from one branch to the other, somehow getting faster and faster.

Finally, the natives catch up with the Marine, but the Marine is stronger, so he scares them off by plucking a tree out of the ground and throwing it at them. The natives make shrieking noises and quickly walk away, and the Marine, named EPAR, activates his jetpack and flies to his camp. EPAR grabs a bag of flashlights and flies back to the hut, when he learns that the Marines there have just activated their night vision in order to see the hut. EPAR feels somewhat 'down' after this event, and asks his CO, named REPA, if he can sit down and do nothing. REPA then explains that procrastinating is not part of the way of the Ultramarines, which is his Space Marines unit, and begins pointing to the sky and yelling about the God Emperor.

EPAR is not in the mood for this, so he ignores REPA and walks away, to REPA's shock. REPA begins to quietly shout at EPAR, but he ignores REPA and continues walking. REPA turns to to his brothers and brands EPAR a heretic for walking away, and orders his men to hunt down EPAR. EPAR, however, is not bothered by his CO's fuss, and walks into a native village and demands some corn to eat. The natives instead throw many spears at EPAR, which luckily bounce off his armor, so EPAR raises his bolter and massacres the village's natives. One native comes out with a steam gun and fires many rounds in rapid succession, but the bullets bounce off EPAR's thick ceramic armor.

EPAR roars loudly and fires his bolter at the native, who is the chief, and kills him instantly. Suddenly, there is a chopping noise in the air, and a strange and unwieldy-looking flying machine hovers over the trees. The flying machine has a bit of metal which seems to spin around, which seemed unsafe for any warriors near the machine. There is a hissing noise from the machine, and white fog is rising out of something on the machine's wings. EPAR sees something coming towards him at high speeds, and quickly ducks out of the way, yet the metal things follow him and there is an explosion.

EPAR stands up and dusts off himself, while cackling loudly. EPAR's armor was designed to survive direct hits from MBTs, so a few bits of metal from a primitive aircraft won't even scratch him. EPAR raises his bolter and fires five times, yet he does not fire five times, since there are no bolts in his bolter.

Nay, instead, EPAR's bolter producing a loud clicking noise, so EPAR puts it in his backpack and takes out his chainsword instead. Now, the aircraft is flying in circles around EPAR, firing some sort of automatic rifle at him. It was almost like an autogun, yet slightly weaker. EPAR leaped into the air, and raised his chainsword, ready to bring down the wrath of a true Astartes onto this puny craft assaulting him with bits of metal.

EPAR's chainsword misses by only a few meters in the air, and EPAR lands heavily on his feet. EPAR stumbles slightly, falls over, and now the aircraft is firing two metal things at him. EPAR for some reason cannot move, and the metal things are far larger than the first metal things. EPAR removes his bolter and fires at the aircraft, watching in grim satisfaction as the bolt rounds shear the gunship in two.

However, none of this actually happens, as EPAR's bolter has no ammunition inside it. Even as EPAR moves his hands to his backpack, he can see the metal things coming ever so slightly closer. EPAR is just reloading his bolter when he realizes that the metal things are literally less than a meter away, and coming every so slightly closer.

End of Episode 1  